Tuesday, September 9, 2008

#1 Think Twice before Saying It

Kindergartners:
What do you think this picture is? Is it a Orange or is it a Frog? Frogs can be the color orange and they live almost everywhere. In your backyard, at your family and friends houses, in the rain forest. Frogs live where they like the weather, what bugs are around they want to eat. If you think its an Orange the first time you saw this picture there's nothing wrong with that; you have a very creative mind and catch the interesting details first. Probably all of you are thinking "Why is there a frog with an orange peal as its stomic?" or you could be thinking "Did a frog eat a Orange peal? Is that why the frogs stomic is like a orange?" What you chose to believe you are right. If you see a frog and a orange and have now decided that there are Frog Oranges, no one can tell you that you are wrong.

Chefs:
So chef. I have a new ingredient for you! No one else has ever seen or heard of this new discovery. I present to you, the Orange Frog! This is a frog that has a orange peal for its stomic. The peal teaste just like an orange and if you like to serve frogs then you should
get this new ingredient. If you don't like to serve frog then all you have to do is take the take the peal out and use the peal as a decorative part of the meal. It tastes just like a orange but its meat. If you decide to cook it or how ever you decide to use this new ingredent it will all work out fine.

1 comment:

Ursa Major said...

The picture didn't show up, but...
I like for the kindergartners how you make it into an educational thing too. And I like how you say that whatever they think, they are right. It seems pretty easy for kindergartners to understand, but you might want to make the sentences a little less complex.
A little spelling correction: orange peel, and stomach. I like how you try to catch the chef's attention. It was a little harder to understand since the picture didn't show up. But I like how you give different examples of how it could be used, like you are selling it. But maybe for this one, make it a little more formal/be careful about run-on sentences.